If you want my honest opinion from a 50 year old dude I'll give it to you respectfully.
Btw: I want to try some of these as well.
For me personally I think the music doesn't work. It has harsh language that I would not allow my preteen kids listen to and would prefer something more powerful. I know that may be a generational thing.
Another thing is that I like the music to follow the action in the clips. For example in the beginning when Ghost is kicking off you have close up footage of his foot contacting the ball. Internally I expect a hard beat or something that synchronizes that kick with a boom feeling in the music.
I do like how you minimized the sound to add the "we're going to put up 40" and other dialogue into the video.
Bottom line for me. The music needs to follow the action.
Please take this as my old ass opinion. Others may feel differently. But I think we would all agree that it is awesome that you are doing this. Keep it up. I'll watch as many as you post. I love these things.