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Commentary: Dolphins Season Preview/NFL Sweet Sixteen

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send me a copy .ill use it to wipe my ass.then ill send it back to you .
To bad you couldn't have toilet paper with butt boys picture on each sheet. :rocker:
 
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Finally, some honesty: "the Patriots should win it all."

"6. Philadelphia Eagles- Finally, a team from the JV conference. This team’s fate all depends on Donovan McNabb’s health because I guarantee you"
Guarantees are dangerous. Omit them. Even if you don't, you shouldn't say "guarantee you". Simply say, "I guarantee". Many more instances can be found ...

"Had he continued his yards pace and completed a 16 game schedule, he would’ve amassed more than 1250 yards and he did all of this with the burden of possibly the worst play calling in all of the NFL."
He certainly was on pace to post those numbers, but this reads like another guarantee. "he would have" should be changed to "he was on pace to".

I really don't have time to correct all your grammatical errors, but I'd strongly recommend a college writing course, if you plan on continuing this.
 

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Here's my first commentary for Finheaven.com. I threw in some nice words about the Patriots towards the bottom under the NFL's sweet sixteen. Flame away haters.

http://aqua.dolphins-insider.com/
Aqua Sock, it's one thing to post replies on a football site and it's another to write a formal blog. You should:
1. Have someone that knows how to read edit your work before you post it.
2. Buy an APA editing manual.
3. Take a college English course.
4. Better yet, stop altogether.
 
I think that Indy is better than the chargers, and that denver isn't the top team in the league. I would put them behind the chargers. Eagles will have QB problems with injuries, and shouldn't be ranked so high. I would take the saints or the Rams over them, but I really think you have some NFC teams ranked too high, because the NFC is not as good as the AFC at the moment. Only a few NFC teams I think are good enough to challenge the AFC for a possible super bowl.

I think the bears might have a chance, but I doubt it, they were lucky to do as good as they did against the patriots and colts. Hester is moving to receiver and he might be good there, he is sort of a motivated Bethel Johnson.

Denver at #1, they have a young QB, still unproven. They have a great CB duo with bailey and bly. Travis Henry will do good, like every running back put in Denver. Also thank you for not putting the pats at #1, I hope your favorite patriots player reads it. ;p

Patriots at #2, I think they are definitely in the top 3, even with the injuries during the season, but you never know, it is hard to imagine how great a defense of all 1st stringers would look in the post-season. Also Brady has good targets, first time in his career with exception of branch, and younger brown, but he has never had any receiver of this caliber.

Bengals at #3, well we will see if they can make bail by sunday

San Diego chargers at #4, they have a ton of talent, but you do need a coach better than Turner. Marty couldn't win a playoff game, but at least he could get them there.

Colts at #5, I actually kind of agree with a ranking like this, but Peyton will manage enough points to make up for the defense that will be even worse this year. They added a receiver, but he needs to get in time with manning, which stokley already had.

Eagles at #6, McNabb, WILL be injured, and without garcia who knows how they will turn out. They don't have a running game a combo of westbrook not being good IMO, and them never running it. They do have a good line though, so we will see.

Rams at #7, defense still terrible, but great offense, best receiver in holt, and a great RB, I would take them over the eagles.

I am not going any farther because I don't feel like typing at the moment, please excuse the hundreds of spelling/grammar mistakes, thank you.
 
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