Bedard breaks down 3rd and 17 play

[SVN]

Jets fail to finish off Patriots in New England

 

[ctpatsfan77]

"Fail to finish off"?

Did the Pats make a double-digit comeback I'm unaware of?

 

[RobertWeathers]

He is a fat oaf.

-Chris Nilan

 

[RayClay]

Well if you've got the lead and the other team in their territory on 3rd and 17 and your supposed to be the best defense in the league...

I don't see anything wrong with that characterization. The Jets continued to not finish by giving gronk a freebee and failing to respect the clock!

 

[MagicMarker]

The title has been corrected...but how about this sentence:

"Defensively, there are two schools of thought on defending that kind of a defense. "

 

[RayClay]

The title has been corrected...but how about this sentence:

"Defensively, there are two schools of thought on defending that kind of a defense. "

I noticed that. Poor writing.

 

[patchick]

I noticed that. Poor writing.

That's more like a typo, IMO. It's an inevitable part of the new world of real-time journalism -- in the past, Bedard (or an editor or proofreader) would have had a chance to look the piece over another time before publishing and catch the slip.

Personally, I liked reading his close look at a pivotal play. It was a rare football article with actual football content.

 

[ctpatsfan77]

That's a typo. This is poor sentence construction:

Edelman ran hard at safety Dion Bailey, who was in the game because starter Calvin Pryor (ankle) was out and was claimed off waivers from the Seahawks less than a month ago.

This sounds like Calvin Pryor was claimed off waivers.

But I agree that some writing issues aside, it is a great article.

 

[RayClay]

That's more like a typo, IMO. It's an inevitable part of the new world of real-time journalism -- in the past, Bedard (or an editor or proofreader) would have had a chance to look the piece over another time before publishing and catch the slip.

Personally, I liked reading his close look at a pivotal play. It was a rare football article with actual football content.

I thought it was insightful and agree on the lack of editorial control these days.

 

[RayClay]

That's a typo. This is poor sentence construction:



This sounds like Calvin Pryor was claimed off waivers.

But I agree that some writing issues aside, it is a great article.

I noticed that also. You need to take responsibility for your writing if you have a large audience.