Aqua4Ever04
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i do.your a douche bag .a liar a welsher and cry baby a racist piece of cow dung.im going to enjoy dumping on yet another one of your sh-t threads lolFixed, now, do you have anything to say about the content or are you just grading the work?
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Very difficult to read, very wordy.. need to learn how to write.. it is harder to write a short concise article, than a long rambling one.. you also need to look at shorter concise paragraphs.. your content might be good, but you cannot tell because your style sucks... as a reader I got lost in the first couple of paragraphs..
Funny, because the only people that feel that way are you douchebags.
Yes, the people who don't get on their knees and give you a blow job for your posting your drivel can't be right... Of course not.
Dude, you are such a arsehole I don't even know where to start.
Listen, AquaDouchebag4ever, just STFU and leave already. I've attempted to give you constructive criticism and all you can do is continue to throw your pathetic childish insults around? Man, you are an ungrateful SOB and yes, I believe you will be a complete and utter failure as a sports journalist unless you take your head out of your arse and realize that you don't know a damn thing about writing a decent story.
ya you areI'm not a ******* moron, dude.
You couldn't care less about the improvement of my writting. You critisize to insult me, not help me. I'm not a ******* moron, dude.
Funny, because the only people that feel that way are you douchebags.
Funny, because the only people that feel that way are you douchebags.
You should be banned, I tried to read it, offered some constructive criticism of your so called article... pretty confident that people all over the country are clamoring at your door to put this on their web sites..
PatswickedPissah said:I'll call The Welcher on this.
We're the only ones?
Post links to 3 comments praising this article.
Paid hookers don't count.
Well, I actully got offered 2 positions already. I must be doing something right.
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