More Pats Poetry

Discussion in ' - Patriots Fan Forum' started by PatsFanInVa, Apr 29, 2007.

  1. PatsFanInVa

    PatsFanInVa Supporter Supporter

    April, 2007

    Young poets write of true love's kiss,
    And older ones of ripe love's bliss;

    Heroic acts urge war-like lines,
    While drunks write odes to hops and vines;

    The maudlin soul entreats with death;
    The sick man's pen begs one more breath;

    But great affairs (and even small)
    Don't enter in my thoughts at all.

    For just today, amidst The Draft,
    my breath was stopped, my saneness halfed,

    My palms went moist, my eyesight troubled,
    my speech undone, my heart-rate doubled;

    All life became a static hiss -
    For what are life's cares, next to this?

    For death could come for me tonight,
    and take me - smiling! - with no fight.

    And on my stone, these words emboss:
    The Patriots got Randy Moss!
  2. maverick4

    maverick4 Banned

    did you write that? well done
  3. spacecrime

    spacecrime Veteran Starter w/Big Long Term Deal

    There once was a man name of Moss
    Who got tired of loss after loss
    His team it did suck
    But he had the luck
    To start catching balls Brady would toss
  4. maverick4

    maverick4 Banned

    Randy not happy
    Wants to win a Superbowl
    Touchdown! Brady-Moss

    - Maverick4
    Last edited: Apr 29, 2007
  5. JoePats

    JoePats In the Starting Line-Up

    Great job VA.
  6. PatsFanInVa

    PatsFanInVa Supporter Supporter

    thanks guys, yes, that's mine, but I have to say, haiku, Mav?!?

    Who woulda guessed we could properly execute a haiku on Patsfans?

    Well done back.

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