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    I like your theme and intent, I also like the script.. but have a great deal of difficulty reading it.. might want to make it more legible and have less to read..other than that fine.
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    I echo that.

    I like the colours and balance and the visual originality. But there's certainly a LOT going on in a relatively small space. The marble-like effect is, I suppose, meant to convey the "crystal" idea and, presumably, the typeface that reminds you of Arabic script also gives something of the atmosphere. My guess is that, if you were going to make changes, you might want to think about simplifying the design, although it's hard to say more without seeing it printed on proper paper.
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    Here's the synopsis of the book if it help's with the opinions :D -



    Also, I suppose I can release the Prologue titled John Ryles


    EDIT: Thanks for the help guy's... I want the cover to be perfect.
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