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CLICK HERE to Register for a free account and login for a smoother ad-free experience. It's easy, and only takes a few moments.The title has been corrected...but how about this sentence:
"Defensively, there are two schools of thought on defending that kind of a defense. "
I noticed that. Poor writing.
Edelman ran hard at safety Dion Bailey, who was in the game because starter Calvin Pryor (ankle) was out and was claimed off waivers from the Seahawks less than a month ago.
That's more like a typo, IMO. It's an inevitable part of the new world of real-time journalism -- in the past, Bedard (or an editor or proofreader) would have had a chance to look the piece over another time before publishing and catch the slip.
Personally, I liked reading his close look at a pivotal play. It was a rare football article with actual football content.
That's a typo. This is poor sentence construction:
This sounds like Calvin Pryor was claimed off waivers.
But I agree that some writing issues aside, it is a great article.